The cinquain itself was lovely, perfectly describing 'Positivity'. I like line three especially, it shows positivity as a good and happiness-producing way of life.
I also like that you gave the cinquain format as well, thats helpful to people who want to try a different format of poem. Not only did you write a beautiful poem, but you encouraged others to do the same! Very well done :D
A beautiful poem. Its so true, and brutally honest. The first stanza is exceptionally powerful, I love how it questions the reality of someone's cries unheard. The last two stanzas really stick out in your mind, and they made me think just how many people I may have ignored accidentally or purposefully, and how this may have/will affect them. Brilliant.
From the very begining it shows the alienation and loneliness caused by homosexual feelings, and the 'trapped' feeling it gives, along with the confusion about the sureness that is there. The poem is very descriptive, with touching metaphors.
I cant give many Gift points, but I'll give you some at least. Well done.
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