Hi Whitemorn, firstly I really liked the title and the message within the writing. The question "Who's most important" I found very interesting and it caused me to think about what the poem might be about before even reading it, thus making actually reading the poem more exciting. I really appreciate the direction you chose to go in too. Rather than arguing how a doctors role in society might be larger than an emergency responders you instead chose to emphasize the importance of many jobs and workers within our societies I thought your take on the topic was very refreshing and you did a great job of making a positive, inclusive piece of writing that tied together with a positive message of how important working cohesively and as a societal whole are the true keys to our success as a people. It was a very refreshing and interesting read, thank you for sharing it with us.
Jay Bell
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