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Review by Silver Grayling
Rated: E | (4.0)
The rhyming in this poem is very well done. It doesn't seem forced, except for maybe the last line. The rest of it seems to flow very nicely. I guess if I look at "everyday" as "every day", it makes the movement better. This is a very nice dedication, and I would b touched if someone wrote something as nice for myself. You and your friend should be proud of the bond you share that is shown in this poem.
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