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Review of THE LEGACY  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Ewwww! Something wicked this way comes....LOL. I LIKED this one and would LUV to see it develop into a full-fledged novel!

I think you'd have to either use flashbacks or begin the story much earlier, but beware of having to "tell" the story - if you choose that route.

PLEASE work on this, shine it up, make it walk and talk, and let me read MORE of it.

Best of luck,

ChiefInspector
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