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Review of Vampires feelings  
Review by Jezebel
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This poem is both beautiful and tragic. I am however somewhat distracted with where you stray from what initially appears to be a rhythmic pattern. To rhyme or not to rhyme... That is the question to ask yourself. Either way the result will be a success. Good work.
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