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I try to be honest, point out the positive and describe how different things in the text appear to me as a reader, and then make suggestions of how it might be improved. Each writer has different goals of what they want to express, so I welcome discussion about what their intentions are and how to pass certain meanings.
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science fiction, fantasy, anything out of the norm that brings useful information or helpful experiences to readers
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horror
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Review of Aloof  
Review by J. G. Remeng
Rated: E | (4.0)
This reminds me of all the drama that happens on social networks, especially dating websites and the "chain unfriending" on Facebook. This is like a sophisticated version of a rejection message. I like how you made it sound quirky and brought some wider perspective to the situation: the fact of what's essential, the hearts that beat, and how life goes on. Social media should have a text like this to add when you block someone, it might just help lessen the after-drama and hurt feelings.

If you want to add to this, you could take it to even wider themes like what else in the world is essential and the opportunities there will always be.

Is there some meaning behind the formatting, the paragraphs laid like that, do they form a symbol of some kind?
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