I liked the story. I liked the concept. It took me a little while to get started. It would have been smarter of me to read from the beginning instead of starting with chapter 4. But it was a random pick. I will definitely go back and start from chapter one. You hooked me. I like your style. I would like to be able to give you some sage writing advice, but you seem to be way ahead of me in this .I minored in Celtic Mythology , and sometimes find glaring errors. But not here. I liked your character development in this chapter. Your ending was great, kept the reader wanting more.
The writers block thing, is something I have not experienced yet, my demon is procrastination. The stories are always flowing in my head. To many actually. Great read so far , I hope you publish this.
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