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Review by jlwhitten
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm afraid to read the rest of this if this is
only an exerpt. You might do me in as you did
with "A Halloween Treat." :)
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Review of The Memory Of Her  
Review by jlwhitten
Rated: E | (4.5)
not just because your extremely pretty

"Your" should be "you're" here.

Aside from that, this is a "perfect 10," story.

The best is, that when you remembered here, you
also arranged it so that other's would never
forget her either.

I hope you find a bit of comfort in that too.

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Review of Ephesians 3:14-21  
Review by jlwhitten
Rated: E | (4.0)
Quite good and I'm sure your bible study class got
the message!

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Review by jlwhitten
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for the hints! I had gotten all kinds of reviews on the few writings that I have put in here over the last week. I have only been active for 2 weeks now and love it. I have done some ratings.
The ratings that I had gotten on my own pieces were
all raves until one writer came in and really gave
me some helpful hints on my poem. It has since been
edited and improved. I think you have given me the tools to do the same here.

Jamie
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Review of 'Twas All A Dream  
Review by jlwhitten
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Excellent job! You should help some of these folks with the punctuation of poems. So many either forget or think that a poem doesn't require it.

Write On!
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Review of The Three Trolls  
Review by jlwhitten
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for showing me writing.com! I've read this story before. Glad to see you putting your writing out there. *hugs*
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