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Review by Jmcroberts
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very powerful and the some of the best writing we can do is from the heart and about true events. This evokes emotion which is something that you need in poems.

I to suffer from PTSD, but mine is from a car crash where I nearly died and now suffer seizure because of. I finally decided to overcome my free this last month and actually start driving again, 5 years after my crash. It's been a tough road, but at the same time its rewarding because it feels that I am finally conquering something that has had a vice on me for awhile.

Great job overall.

Jimmy
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Review of The Promise  
Review by Jmcroberts
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really good and really flows well. It is the perfect size for a poem and also gives you the emotional response and attachment throughout the entire story. Overall it is really good and tells a good story about two different people. Good job on this piece.

Jimmy
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Review of Forever in Time  
Review by Jmcroberts
Rated: E | (4.0)
Simple and sweet. Very easy to read and flows well. Overall it is good and gets to the point. Poems are meant to invoke feelings which you do here, and also to tell a story without writing out long ones. Great job overall. I look forward to reading more by you.

Jimmy
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