My dogma just got run over by your karma! Seriously, though, this is a very good poem. It flows well, and the imagery is great. The road metaphor tends to over used, but you pulled it off Quite well. "Free verse" is also not easy to do well, but it apears to me that you have tallent. great work!
p.s. I hope you weren't offended by the joke, but it came to mind when I read your poem.
Very catchy! I like a good pun, But I love a bad pun. This falls somewhere in between. One thing to keep in mind is that money is also power(energy?) So keep charging on! I look forward to reading more of your writing. good work. Ihave to give you some credit!
This could have been a great poll, but there werent enough choices. If you just added a
the choice of "other" it would have been a lot better. I'm not sure that any of the choices are even in the bottom ten. More choices would definetely been better. nice idea though.
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