You have found the right words but have you found the right person. This piece reminds me of the things I have benn through in a past relationship and made me smile. It was prefectly put together to express what you were feeling. It showed hope and determination for a love. So my friend keep shining I really like this piece. Thank you for sharing.
It's like you are that person . Looking just for that direction to go in, and you know once you get there ,you know ,you have to start all over again. It's very good but it could be just a little bit long and a little more detail but you did catch my eye so you did well
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