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Review of In Control  
Review by john33b
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice little piece , I get where you are coming from , the ignorance of youth the vulnerability of life , found one or two lines a bit needless though , generally excellent style , I can,t comment on grammar , because my grammar skills are also lacking .
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Review by john33b
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was pretty vivid , good piece of prose , well done .
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Review of I Am Your Moon  
Review by john33b
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice little poem , flows well .
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Review by john33b
Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes I agree , I,m in my early thirties so I agree , face book etc for some or even most now is just a compulsive behavior , I spend time , aimlessly scrolling up and down , complete waste of time , I started using social media 6-7 years ago and I,d say its had zero positive benefit , in fact the contrary would be the case .
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Review by john33b
Rated: E | (4.5)
That,s really pretty good strong feelings expressed well .
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Review of Old Friends  
Review by john33b
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Pleasant little story keep going.
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