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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow, this sounds so much like the life of the majority of people. It's sad how addicted this generation is to television and video games. If it's not one thing, it's another, as your story points out. And it's almost impossible to get the corporations to let you go once they've got you in their web. The best strategy is to never start. Nice thoughts and good writing technique. I'm coming to like reading your stuff.
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