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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The whole sadistic thing in your story is very engaging to your readers. I could put myself in her position and feel the horrifying vibe around her.
Your story has a good setting, and the characters are very well developed.
I like the way you describe the girl. Although it's morbid, it looks real!

Storyline: Very engaging storyline you have here. I can't wait to read more!
Characters: Morbid yet entertaining!
Point of View: Good first person point of view.
Setting: Excellent vibe.
Dialogue: Chilling.
Description: Detailed. Very nice!
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