Lisztgrieg Thanks so much for your poem. Well written and I believe the message is one that I think all of us need. Enjoy life and even though you make mistakes - it's allowed. Thanks again for your poem.
River - Thanks for the story, whether it's about you or someone else it gave me the opportunity to ask myself if I am guilty of judging others. I would like to say that I have never judged others but that's not true. Earlier today I bought a book at the Goodwill, while my husband drove home I opened the book and this statement was the only thing on the page "It's not differences that divide us. It's our judgments about each other that do." Thanks for your story, hope you are not expecting a review on composition, I don't believe I'm qualified for that but your story goes beyond proper grammar to something more important, how do I answer this question? "What's in my heart and how do I treat others?" Keep writing!
Enjoyed reading your article. I may be misreading this one sentence - I didn't say anything about what happened to her either. The way I read this sentence is that something happened to your mom but you didn't say anything. Or is it - I didn't say anything to her about what happened. I am far from a pro, not much more than a newbie myself, so I may be misinterpreting the sentence. Anyway, I enjoyed your story. Keep Writing!
Zeke - Just looked at your portfolio and I like this poem. It's easy to read, word flow is good and I especially like the last stanza. Have a Good Day!
Such a good article,especially in today's world. Your sentence about doing what God wants and finding out that you can only do it Him is so pertinent. This article brings some balance to the "health and wealth" gospel. Thanks for your article. Plan to check your portfolio.
I can relate to your essay. I have lots of books, so many that I will not be able to read them all. My writing doesn't come easy, takes more time than it should. Thanks for your essay.
Thanks so much for your story. If writing is one of your passions this is a good place to be. Your article expresses well the many things that cancer patients experience.
I like Haiku poetry and this is the 5/7/5 count. As you know interpretation rests with the reader so I will share with you what I get from your poem. Don't despair if I get something that you didn't mean. I see the branch as a safe, innocent place and when the pear drops it encounters all kinds of challenging situations. So I relate your poem to how life is - a time of innocence followed by hardships and a longing to return to a safe place. Thanks for your poem, I enjoyed reading it.
Enjoyed reading about Sylvester. I had forgotten about "sufferin succotash" and your article jogged my memory. Very creative to get Sylvester in the chicken business.
Like this poem. The mystery is what is in the box? But that is one of the things(not telling) that make the poem good. A good picture of someone who keeps the treasure and nurtures it well.
Thanks for you poem about Lacey. I enjoyed reading it and my favorite line is "Big blue eyes Opens wide with surprise". The poem creates a lovely picture of a great grandchild and her grandmother.
Once upon a time there was a town where money began growing on the trees. Every day people rushed to pick the money and they fought with their friends and relatives. It got so bad that they hollered, shoved, and call one another names. One day a tornado hit the town. Because of that all the trees were destroyed. But the people began cleaning up their town. Even with all the damage they were happy. No one was injured and there were lots of hugs. They only feared one thing, planting more trees. Until finally they vowed to change their hearts, plant trees, and harvest love.
Axel I like your story. The combination of politics and a fairy tale make an interesting read. I laughed when you described what you like about our President. The key question(one that a lot are asking)"How's the story end?" and the statement "I didn't have an ending," is probably what many are trying to figure out. Thanks for a good read.
April - Thanks for your article, it contains so many truths and hopefully those who read your article will be encouraged to face(if necessary) living alone. I especially like the wisdom you shared in the last thirteen lines. Plan to read this again, it's a good read.
Espero Thanks for the great poem. It is a delight to read. Your use of your key words fit in so well that it's as if the creation of the poem just happened to include these words. Nice entry.
aruth - As I read your flash fiction my preconceived ending was wrong. The sleep walking element adds a nice surprise or aha! moment. Enjoyed reading your entry.
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