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Review of First Paragraph  
Review by jpenwomen
Rated: E | (3.5)
You're writing is very good and you carry a lot of potential. If you can't get it quite right maybe you could try shortening your sentences and adding more detail to what you say.
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Review by jpenwomen
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very deep and meaningful story, I can tell that you truly captured the emotion that would accompany this experience. Whether or not you wrote this from memory I am unsure of, but you can sympathize with many who have gone through this trail.
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Review of Family Reunion  
Review by jpenwomen
Rated: E | (3.5)
You have a great way of making the picture seen inside your head. It would be a better poem if it read a little bit more smoothly.
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