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Review by raymond
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this piece! You have given us a very direct and descriptive look at a topic many have little knowledge of,.....and from the drivers perspective, have stripped it to it's core. Without fantasy or romance, just a job to be done. The language chosen accentuates this idea very well, and you have found a nice rhythmic feel. There were a couple of lines I found a bit awkward with phrasing, but I know that much of that is just my opinion. Overall, I'd say this is a great job, and I look forward to reading more.
Raymond
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Review by raymond
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellently done! As someone who thinks in terms of poetry, there is a certain rhythm to your writing that had me reading it with that form in mind. It worked! Great imagination and strong images throughout. I loved it!
Raymond
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