this is a great poem i truly enjoyed reading it it is very thought provoking and very well written and the pattern of the rhyme is fabulous i think you did a great job and i would like to thank you for sharing your work and allowing me to read it .. write on!!
i like this wonderfully written little poem it tells a great story and was very fun to read i have no specific edits to suggest overall i think you did a great job thanks so much for sharing your work and thanks for letting me read it keep up the good work
I though that this was a great story it was very easy to read as well as being very well written and very entertaining i think it would also work very well as a screenplay for a feature length movie anyway thanks for letting me read it and keep up the good work ... write on
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