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34 Public Reviews Given
34 Total Reviews Given
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Review by Candace
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great read - your interview felt real. I liked the dialogue and the emotions behind Neil's responses. I got the sense that he felt the interviewer was a jack-ass and felt the work he was doing today was much more important that what was said forty years ago.

I don't know...I could be wrong...just an impression.


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Review by Candace
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with your sentiments, exactly! Great job!
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Review by Candace
Rated: E | (4.5)
Comical - I like it.
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Review by Candace
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I am looking forward to reading more about Luce's adventures. I like the story.
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Review of Mirrors Lie  
Review by Candace
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed your story. Your characters felt real - your story flowed well. I especially loved the ending. Good Job.
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Review by Candace
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I got goosebumps. This is beautiful. The characters and emotions are believable. I am new at reviewing so be patient as I try to tell you why this is flawless.
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Review by Candace
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am new at reviewing. I just like reading, so sorry no words on advice, but I like it.
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Review of Busted  
Review by Candace
Rated: E | (4.0)
This girl reminds me of me.
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Review by Candace
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it.
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Review of Until We Met  
Review by Candace
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful contrast.
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Review by Candace
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it. I enjoyed your humor and your suspense. I am looking forward to reading more.
Just change the following typos and it will be good to go.
inconvenient - inconvenience
tried - cried
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Review of Yo-Yo  
Review by Candace
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it!!
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Review by Candace
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Cute story. There were some grammatical errors, but I loved the message.
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Review of Donald Trump  
Review by Candace
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love it. Great job with get your humor and important message.
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Review of My Broken Heart  
Review by Candace
Rated: E | (4.0)
emotional, powerful
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Review of Love myself  
Review by Candace
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
sad, but hopeful that one day she can see through the eyes.
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Review by Candace
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it!
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Review of This Time  
Review by Candace
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
oh my goodness, this is sad.
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Review of The Colour Blue  
Review by Candace
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the balance.
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Review by Candace
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I like your plot. I love the twist, I would continue to read.
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Review of Doggie Time  
Review by Candace
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Love your story. I can see the love for your pooch. I just noticed one error. It is a common one - change add to ad. "So I searched the Internet and found an add"
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