This is a really wonderful article.Indeed, one must be stubborn if he cheriches any hope of achieving his goals. you really know how to write a well organized essay. the paragraphs are well written and solidly connected; and the movement from one to the other is very clear and not ambigues at all. Also, i can honestly say that the essay is highly persuasive;the various arguments you used to prove your oint are really conving.further, your selection of qoutes is very right on the point.
As for technical mistakes, i really couldn't find any; maybe because i'm honestly not very great with grammar or punctuation my self.
here are my favourite lines:
"If you have chosen a path to travel, don’t expect your loved ones to be beside you, all the time, after you started off your journey. It’s your path, not theirs."
"Inspiration will make you strong enough to start, but that is not the end. One needs to stay inspired throughout the trek and after the trek too."
All in all, you really have a wonderful essay; please keep on writing.
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