Wow! This is really cool! I love that part at the end! That was fantastic! Thankyou for allowing me to read and review your work. I look forward to reading more of your work in future. :D
I like the idea of this piece, it's flow is amazing, and the words that have been used seem to fit perfectly with one another. Thankyou for allowing me to read and review your work. I look forward to reading more of your work in future! :D
What a beautiful piece! I really enjoyed reading this! The word choices are smooth and flowing, and the phrasing is easy to understand. Thankyou for allowing me to read this piece of literature! I thoroughly enjoyed it! I Look forward to reading more of your work in future! :D
This is an interesting and informative read. It has the ability to teach people in a commonly accepted and viable way. Thankyou for giving me the chance to read and review your work. The information found in this piece of literature is worded in such a way that nearly everyone can understand and comprehend. I am very glad that I was able to read your work, and look forward to reading more of your work in the furture. :D
I really enjoyed reading this piece. It's very visual and gives off a peaceful air. It's such a pleasure to read a piece like this one. Thankyou for allowing me the absolute honour of reading your work. It is beautiful and the word choices used are graceful and interesting to read. Overall a fantastic piece of literature! I look forward to reading more of your work in future! :D
This is FANTASTIC!!!!! I loved it!!! can you possibly write more of this story? and if you have can you tell me where I could locate it? It's absolutely brilliant, a master piece! I am absolutely overwhelmed. Thankyou so much for putting this up and giving me the privelege of reading such a wonderful story!!! Please keep up the marvelous work, you have a terrific gift for writting. :D
This is an amazing story! So sad and yet so beautiful! I'm really glad that you chose to put this on here as it allowed me the pleasure of reading such a wonderful piece of litterature! Thankyou so much for that pleasure! This story is just so wonderous, and I absolutely love the characters, within moments of reading this, I was captured, I'm intensely interested in oncology and finding a story like this here, was just lovely. I nearly choked up when Pam died. But I'm glad that you said she looked serene and innocent. Thankyou.
WOW!!! this is an absolutely amazing read!!! It's amazing that one little girl can get into so much trouble in one year...lol :D I really enjoyed reading this piece and I really found it just incredible. But I'd like to know if there is a continuation of this story maybe a longer version? That would be fantastic. :D thank you so much for putting this up, and allowing my the absolute pleasure of reading your work! Keep up the terrific work!
Hahahahahahaahahahahaha!!! It's hillarious!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!! I loved every single moment of reading it! I don't usually like vampire stories, but yours is just fantastic!!! Hillarious!!! I loved the leprechaun/vampire child was fantastically fuuny and clever! I really enjoyed this! and was wondering if there was anymore to come? Thanks for giving me the absolute pleasure of reading this!!! It was terrifically awesome! :D
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wow! I really enjoyed reading this piece :D I found it very interesting and intriguing :D It was terrific and I found it to be an extremely good read :D I love the different characters that you have put in here and the story from what I have read is terrific :D thank you for putting this up and enabling me to read and review it...it was a real honour and pleasure to do so. :D
Wowie! this is a terrific read! I loved every second of reading it! It's a very interesting and intriguing story and I'm already hoping to read the rest of the story! I was also surprized that in your story a 15 yr old male was given a firearm with his uniform for school...I found this intensely interesting...I wish I knew the rest of the story...it sounds terrific and wonderful! I hope that I can read more of your work...keep up the fantastic work :D
wow!!! seriously wow!!!! I loved it! You've got a fantastic skill for writting :D I enjoyed every moment of reading this :D thankyou so much for putting this on...it's intriguing as well...I really want to know the rest of the story now :D it sounds absolutely terrific. :D it was a honor and pleasure to read this :D thankyou so much for this wonderful piece. Make sure to keep up the fantastic work. I hope to read some more of this or other works of yours. :D
Wow! This piece is really beautiful and meaningful! I'm very glad that I got to read it! :D It really made me think and I like that in a poem :D I'm so happy that you wrote this and put it up! :D It's absolutely gorgeous :D make sure you keep up the fantastic work, I hope I can read some more of your stuff :D
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