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Review by Bliss
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is truly a beautiful piece of writing. It's so clear and makes one think..and remember... Thank you so much. I can't wait to read more of your work. Bliss
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Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very powerful and astute observations. Very beautiful use of language. Keep writing! Thank you for sharing your gift.
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Review of Grandmothers  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am a grandmother and I loved this. Honoring anyone is a blessing right back at you. I especially enjoyed the last few lines. Thank you and keep it up!
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Review by Bliss
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Absolutely beautiful! To see God's beauty in the love of your life and everywhere is the "gift". Keep seeing it (and writing about it!) Thank you.
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Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this. As a caregiver who has worked with people with various disabilities I appreciate you giving your readers a glimpse into your life. Your work needs to be published somewhere if it's not already. Thank you for sharing your gift! Keep writing!
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Review of Poppies  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful. Powerful use of words. Just stick an l in coldy. Keep it up! I'm going to check out more of your work. Thank you!
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Review of What I Believe  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have the same belief! You expressed yourself very clearly. Thank you for sharing your gift. Write on!
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Review of A Zephyr's Kiss  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is absolutely beautiful! Your choice of words are magical. Thank you for your gift. I'll have to check out your portfolio and read more!
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Review of Space Cowboys  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sounds like it was so fun! Your writing took me on a fabulous journey. I like your style! keep it up!
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Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting concept! Wow! You painted a great picture! I found only one noticeable spelling error....."threw" should be "through". Now I have to think about who I'd want resurrected...maybe......Keep it up!
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Review by Bliss
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I'd love to read more of this story! I hope it continues. Very well written with only one place where the word "old" was left out. (after "sixteen") I got into the story so please... Keep it up!
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Review of The Tidal Pool  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (4.5)
I felt like I was there! You painted a beautiful picture. I'm very familiar with La Jolla. I grew up in San Diego and my High school summers were spent on the La Jolla beaches. You are a wonderful wordsmith. Keep up the great work!
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Review of Ferrets  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you! My 13 year old son and I enjoyed lots of laughs reading this! You did a great job with word choices!! Keep it up!
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Review of The Rose  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is so beautiful! I particularly love the lines "For even in death..." You did a great job on capturing the essence of life, death and the rose. Thank you
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Review of Keep me safe  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this piece! I've been a caregiver for over 15 years and can relate to this story very much.You got into the mind of one of my clients in particular. You did a beautiful job in portraying the pain of dementia. Thank you. Keep up the powerful sharing and writing!
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Review by Bliss
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I didn't want it to end! Can't wait to read more! Aside from a couple of spelling errors," psychiatrist", I felt engaged and wanting to know these characters! Keep it up!
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Review of Tapestry of Light  
Review by Bliss
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful. I could feel myself inside of this poem. You took me on a wonderous journey. Keep it up!
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Review of Unspoken Fears  
Review by Bliss
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice job Steven! I can totally relate as I do overnights as a caregiver! Keep up the good work!
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