This is a real eye opener, and it speaks the truth. If only we took the time to look past the first glimpse of people into their hurts, loves, and desires maybe then we can discover true friendship and the true person behind the smile and "everything is fine". Maybe we will be able to help or just be a shoulder to cry on. Great description! I felt like I was acually hurting for those people, I'm excited to see more of your work.
Wow, I really like your style of writing. It made sense yet I feel that if I read it over again, I will see something else in it. When a writer is able to portray more than one realization in a story, it gives more to you. Not only the enjoyment of what it has to offer but the thrill of seeking other mysteries inside of the story.
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