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Review of Couch Critters  
Review by Kamiah
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the gentle rhyming scheme of your piece. This would be very easy for children to learn and recite!

My couch occasionally has coughing fits and expells old batteries, half-eaten Tootsie Pops, pennies, q-tips, the occasional tv remote changer.

I also love the illustrations that go with your piece -- especially the dust bunnies :)

Good job Wordsy :)
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