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Review by kv13
Rated: E | (3.0)
Repetition was very nice, I enjoyed the story line. It took a twist at the end, I didnt realize it was about a dead person, but i liked that i didnt expect it.
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Review by kv13
Rated: E | (3.5)
It was a beautiful poem and I can definitely relate. I loved the repetition at the end of each line, it really stressed your point. It could have had larger words, however the point was still conveyed without the use of higher level words. You are a great writer and I look forward to reading more from you.
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