I think this is a heart warming and yet tear jerking story. At times you feel as thought you are right there with the carictors going threw everything they are feeling, and at the end you definetly feel as though your heart is being riped out of your chest and your very soul removed from your body and cast away from you never to be seen again. i think this writer has great things ahead for him he just needs to make sure he doesnt go on one thing for to long, dont explain everything to death , sometimes alittle left to the emagination can be a good thing. thank you very much for the great story it is one of my most liked stories.
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