The poem has given a pretty good imagery. This poem has a meaning that when you live someone you feel safe and they make you have butterflies in you stomach. This poem can also has a meaning of old couple love in the past where they have trust to one another, but can't survived without the person beside their side. "Our Heart’s entwine us to each other. Forever you will me my Lover." I like this line because it show connection to each other feeling.
This poem is decribing about how they are finding something in there missing heart. I like it, because when you are lost to find someone that you dont know. This can be the love of your life or a desire that you want to ask people for advice to it."I shall call for him no more but if he returns to me I will gladly accept him" I like this line because it make have a compassion and forgiveness to other person you have love. The of course they feel sorry to there mistake, themn i will gladly accept you.
This is inspiring to teenager or to anybody that are about to give up their dream in life, becaise of temptation of others. This story has given a answer that anyone can acheive a dream. That anyone can denied the temptation of the society and the community. People don't have to be the same as everyone else, because everyone are unique in different way and this can be a good thing or a bad thing, this can depend to you and only you."In life not all dreams do come true but if you really want something you will push so very hard to achieve what we want. Forget friends who have bad influence and never listen to people who always say and think negatively that way you shall prosper."I like this because it tell you that you can achieve a dream and choose you friend wisely also.
I like this poem! The content of the poem is relatable, because in evry sigle person there is a story or adventure to occur. This peom talked about the life story and what event out there in the world thst I can do or achieve. I like this stanza "There's a story in there somewhere, I can hear it calling. Calling for me to bring it to life, A story of adventure, romance, or strife.", because it teel that you have a story to tell and adventure to feel in your years of life. That in life you have great experiece to feel and learn to be the beast or have a wonderful life. This peom will be loved to people, because their is different life story in the world that want to fing there adventure, romeance, or just want to be contant and happy to the life we al have experience.
The poem is touchful in my heart. This poem made me feel that the closes people in your life can be the people who love you dearly even thought they can be blinded. This peopm really touch my heart, beacuse writing a peom of a broken heart, but full of senserity to the feeling that you have feel. This peom can relate to anybody, because people can love another but that person also love a different guy or a girl. The repetion of this peom was okay to it because your talking about your emotion. I like this "But no matter how long this letter would be, I know the fact that I can't have you. So I'll say goodbye to you, my dear. ", because it show how strong you are to move on and let go to find a new love and start again to the beginning of you live life.
I like the poem of how it describe it feeling of heart being lost and how it once love someone.I like the part "My heart withstood grimace It stood strong against mistrust
But it finally fell limp with your brutality – ". This describe of the person emotion and how this person survive to struggle of it life or love. But there is the time where it feel so useless and how everything in life is so empty and alone. That in life there no meaning to live and lost it purpose. the poem has a meaning of lost love or life and it describe of past experience of conflict it life. That this person die until the end of his life.
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