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Review by MKNZJ
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
This was a heartfelt piece, though some of the wording was a little strange. I had to read a few of the lines twice to understand it. This flow is a little choppy, but your point came across well.
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Review by MKNZJ
Rated: E | (3.0)
It felt a bit sloppy at the end, but it did pull at the strings of my emotions. It got the point across, the feeling of hope and yet great sadness. Nicely done.
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Review of Gentle Warrior  
Review by MKNZJ
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully written and it flows naturally. In a short amount of words you captured a strong message.
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