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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
a very beautifully written haiku

all aspects of the poem appear to be in order-
three lines
correct amount of syllables per line
and about nature

I liked this line in particular "vase of endless starry lights"- I can just picture the light reflecting off of it

great reading!
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