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Review by Tek-ak-with-a
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello, wolf whisperer!

I really enjoyed this reflection. It is a cozy and warm reminder of clinging to the good, especially when life surrounds us with times of storminess that threaten our commitment to one another.

There is some editing to be completed, but none that negatively effects the flow nor the mood. There is one sentence I believe should have stayed more personal and close to your heart. In paragraph five, sentence two which begins "Every time I light. . .," I would've liked it to have said, ". . .of time can ensnare my soul and show me just what. . . ." Outside of that? I was able to envision the moment and the lasting positive effect. I enjoyed the beautiful description of fire, which illicits a longing to have a fireplace within my own home.

Thank you for sharing an endearing moment, which will last a lifetime.

I remain, but changed forever
Tek-ak-with-a
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