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Review by K. Lotus
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I laughed at 'poop' and I cried at the end. Beautiful story. :)

XOXO
K-Lotus
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Review by K. Lotus
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey there!

Just wanted to say that I have spent the last 30 mins at work reading your Connor and I chapters. If I'm fired it's on you and that's a compliment lol :) Very well written and I found myself completely relating to the mother figure. My mom was just like that and it was seriously torture through my teen years.

Again I enjoyed this very much and can't wait for more of your stuff. :)

XOXO
K-Lotus.
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Review by K. Lotus
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh wow. I can completely relate to this poem. You did an excellent job of making the reader feel every range of your emotion. I have been there one too many times. I actually just uploaded a poem of mines about the pain of loss. Very very nice.

XOXO
K-Lotus
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