Hi there, Kåre Enga! I came across this piece as I was browsing the children's genre and thought I'd let you know I enjoyed it. It's playful and extremely catchy. It's just the type of thing I would have read to my nephew when he was younger. I can imagine us reciting it together complete with sound effects from his own drum set. Keep up the great work!
Hi there, Sandra! I came across your poem while browsing the children's genre. I've recently become interested in writing for children, but haven't actually done it yet. I just wanted to tell you that I enjoyed your poem. It has good imagery and flows well. I also read it to my 11 year old daughter and she liked it too. (I did have to explain what a ravine is though.) I wish you the best of luck on your writing journey & hope to read more from you.
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