Wow. This is just absolutely amazing. I love it! The charaters seem so alive and real. The way you write is very clear and full of detail. I cannot find anything wrong with this piece at all! I can't wait to read more, I believe you have a wonderful story here and it should be published! keep up this amazing work!
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