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Review of A Lovely Chain  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I quite enjoyed that. Had just two small problems with it.
1. I wanted to know where he got the motivation to send the letter to the next person. But that might just be a personal preference.
2. There are a few tiny grammatical errors
"didn’t even know wether the sender is female in the first place" - 'is' should be 'was'
"Maybe you already know, maybe you haven’t" - 'haven't' should be 'don't' (or 'maybe you already knew, maybe you didn't')

But those are small complaints. Thumbs up!
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