I thoroughly enjoyed this story. You managed to paint a vivid picture and the dialogue was smooth flowing, realistic and humorous. I would have liked to read more but they're called short stories for a reason. Well done.
I think I may go investigate some more of your writing.
What a wonderfully evocative story. I can't say I enjoyed it because it was so sad, but I can tell you it was well written and very graphic. I believe you could take it even further than you already have but you managed to tell the story effectively even though it was succinct. Well done.
Once again, very graphic and vivid imagery. You are a very capable writer who paints a picture with words and successfully makes a story flow. I enjoy your style of writing and find myself absorbed by the world you have created. Well done and continued good luck to you.
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written and engaging with vivid imagery and detail. The character development and motivations are depicted concisely and I found myself absorbed and wanting to know more. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading any additions.
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