So earnest, and yet, a feel of futility... Time is chasing on, whilst we wilt, wait, and then wither. Comparable to how I feel around a lot of people or family. Just... alone. Sitting next to the one you love, knowing they will never be yours... Alone. I know this dying. You depict the feeling quite well. Well done.
All dreams are worth the maximum price... For without dreams, reality never really shows it's face. My dreams keep me sane and content. I do believe we are all special people in this world; for dreams shape who we are and what we may one day become. Your dream is special to me because it tells me about you and allows me to dream your dream with you... Dreams are worth holding onto even when the time for them has passed.
I was gently ripped from mine own reality and encompassed in deep stormy emotions whose tide never fails but swells and swells 'til you fill to bursting and realize love that strong can never spill over for it is without the boundaries of mortality. Very impressive and heartfelt. I only hope it's not your heart that is within the shadows...
I must confess I was thinking of BEER!! My second confession is I love fries too! When you said golden oil, I thought about how beer makes your blood feel thick! ROFL! Very enjoyable and quite humorous. Type on. I look forward to more.
I was strongly moved by this beautiful piece!! For so many a time I have been just that. A clown. It took me almost 25 yrs to realize who I am. 25 yrs to rid myself of this clown. To see with such clarity is a gift. I believe you posses 'the sight' to the heart of man. Very impressive. I feel this piece is a 5, I give you 4 for the simple fact everything happens for a reason and there is always a lesson to be learned... Always room for improvement. Every experience should be a lesson learned. Reading this strong, possessive, heart wrentching, soul-searching cry ... I must confess... I am at a loss for words. Thank you.
I was consumed to brimming over... That is how I see those that I love. I've stayed in the shadows watching over them and waiting for the need of me. They say if you know someone long enough, you know what they're trying to hide, by the way they're trying to hide it... This brought tears to my eyes. I am glad to know that there is someone out there that has experienced that kind of love. The kind that rocks you to the core. More than impressive; outstanding.
For many nights I have expereinced just what you discribe. I too love 'beyond the rain' and wake 'breathless'... I was enwrapped; I felt and I tasted... Sublime.
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