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Review of Winds of change  
Review by justlandry
Rated: E | (3.5)
I liked this poem. It's short, but it has so much meaning in it. We sometimes forget that we ARE the future. The beginning where you mentioned "the rebel's smoky halo," I was a bit confused on who the "rebel" was. The first stanza is completely different from the rest of the poem. I'm assuming it was intentional to really "draw in" the reader. About the third stanza I really felt like I understood what you were saying. After re-reading several times, I still don't quite understand the first stanza. The syllable scheme in which you wrote is nice. Thanks for sharing!
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