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Review of Death Comes To Me  
Review by leean2u
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
TTGB,
I am a newbie and have only done a few reviews, so bare with me, poems are my favorite and I like yours but it did not have an affect on me. That could be me and not you, as I'm sure you felt it or you would'nt have wrote it. I guess it felt disjointed to me, but it was grammatically correct and format appeared tight. Keep up the good work, I will be looking at your works from time to time and invite you to also review mine.
Happy New Year!
Leean
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Review of The Metal Box  
Review by leean2u
Rated: E | (5.0)
Milhaud,
I realize how hard it must have been on you as well, especially putting the pen to paper recalling all the old wounds/memories. Family tragedy is never easy and believe me no matter what the circumstances are regarding the loss of ones child; a parent will always behold the blame or responsibility. It is just the way it is. I too have lost a son, my eldest to a tragic accidental hanging. Unfortunately I also lost my one and only nephew to a suicidal hanging; so I really empathise with you. Your writing is genuine and well written. Please keep writing and remember the wonderful memories you had with your brother and parents. Hope to review more works in the future, and I would appreciate it very much if you would also look at my works at your leisure.
Happy New Year!
Leean
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Review by leean2u
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent review of MJ's life and the events that made him the King of POP!! It is clear that you had a very deep and personal bond to him through his music and videos. I do'nt believe I've read a better account of his works, my sisiter was similarly affected. I remember being maybe 5yr's old when I was introduced to J5 with MJ as the littlest on like me but also the front of the group with his beautiful voice. Memories.
Thank You For your Beautiful Words,
Leean
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Review of Trail Of Smiles  
Review by leean2u
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
While I am not into sci-fi, and it was abit hard at first weather too keep reading; I did keep reading and I am astounded at your insight. In the end you brought tears to my eyes and that is not easy. Good luck in the contest and I think you are a great story-writer.
leean
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