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Review by AWynn
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a really good story with great descriptive words. I enjoyed reading it. I didn't enjoy, however that the begining sounded alittle juvenille. I did appreciate how easily everything segued into each other. It was a nice ending although it leaves the reader hanging and I didn't like that!!

Keep writing!!

~ A Wynn ~
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Review of Sanctuary  
Review by AWynn
Rated: E | (4.5)
I say it could've been longer. But I know you, Ms. Hodde, so I know that you barely have time to do so. I think that really portrays how you are. It's really good! :)

(PS Its Amanda!!)
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