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Review by desperado66
Rated: E | (5.0)
In response, I have a poem for you;

Waking to see each and every day
seeing new things and reliving some old.
Keeping the hope to meet the one of my dreams
caring him in my heart no matter where I might be.
Igniting my messages of life within
so I will be ready when he does come near
Wondering if I will ever get rid of the fear
Knowing he will someday so his face here.
Having confidence in the fact that our love will last
because we will have travelled so far and avast.
Lighting the candle of love that one special night
finally seeing your image through the shadows.
I then pronounce those clumsy words: I love you
The rockets and stars from the heavens go wild
because to be in love with love you always stay a child and hope for that knight in shining armor and do believe he does exist even with his white horse.

Have fun. I wish you love.

Leprican66
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Review of hurt  
Review by desperado66
Rated: E | (5.0)
Doubt was her name she said to me
She dreamed of falling in love eternally
She told me life was hard and mean
And it wasn’t what it seems
She thought life was to be so easy
And her heart went out to the needy
She believed love was to conquer all
But when she tried there was a fall
Ever since that day she has gone awall
Searching all the roads and malls
Trying to find the love she once shared
With someone who will truly care
This woman passed my path one cloudy day
And I swear the sun was on its way
She looked at me with her pretty blue eyes
But I saw behind the disguise
I saw the sorrow that she put away
To talk to me again on the next rainy day
But wisdom is what she gave me that late night
And I am willing to help her win that fight.
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Review of The Review Mixer  
Review by desperado66
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is with constructive critism and openness of our minds that we can become the best we are able to and most importantly is to take what is best for us and let go of the rest.
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