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Review of Never Mind  
Review by Travesty
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Interesting. A little unusual, not what I'd usually read but its interesting. Were the spelling errors intentional or just an error?

Anyway, thanks for sharing.
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Review by Travesty
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Uh...wow. Got issues?
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Review of Stay  
Review by Travesty
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice use of repetition to create a greater feeling of the yearning the subject feels, and with the variation at the end was a nice touch.

I think I'd say the fact that a lot of it is left to the imagination of the reader also makes it just that bit more powerful, makes it a far more interesting and compelling read.


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