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Review of Sweet dreams  
Review by lonelyrosco
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Let me first say that I think that this little tale has the potential to become a full blown novel.
You have a vivid imagination Tabitha that needs to be shared with the world.
All that I can really offer in the way of critique is to encourage you to create more conflict with your
characters or try and raise the stakes somehow.
Otherwise-like I stated earlier-the potential for this story to grow is limitless.
Good luck with your writing.
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Review of Fateful Night  
Review by lonelyrosco
Rated: E | (3.0)
I found this tale to be a realistic look at the repercussions of marital infidelity.
I felt empathy for Michael;which is indicative of good character development.
You also managed to provide a detailed description of the surroundings and make the reader feel
as if he/she were actually there;which is not an easy thing to do.
But if you want this story to really stand out then I would suggest reading it over and
making sure that your grammar is spot on.I hate being critical of anyone else's work because I
am still learning how to write myself.But I did notice a lot of grammatical errors Aaron.
If I can offer some advice I would suggest that you get someone to read over your stories,
as they may be able to spot mistakes that us writers tend to miss from time to time(this is
usually because we are too busy focusing on the story itself).
You're probably going to hear this a hundred times Aaron,but the best way to improve your
writing craft is to just keep writing.
I hope that this helped in some way.
Good luck with your writing career buddy.
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