The imagery in this piece is amazing. I could imagine I was there watching it all. I could also feel the energy pouring out of this and it evoked a feeling of comfort and love. The last chunk is my favorite and I really like the phrase moon dance. I honestly thought this was very good.
I think this piece is very good. It uses very good imagery and I could feel the desire radiating from your words. Your wording also makes it easy for readers to connect with what the subjects should be feeling within the poem. It speaks of pure and genuine love and romance.
I think this piece is very good. It uses very good imagery and I could feel the desire radiating from your words. Your wording also makes it easy for readers to connect with what the subjects should be feeling within the poem. It speaks of pure and genuine love and romance.
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