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Review of Nature Never Told  
Review by Lovely Strife
Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me cry. If something causes me to have such a strong emotion then I am hard pressed not to give it a 5 rating.

The last verse reminds me very much of how I felt after my great grandmother died. You never say goodbye forever, death doesn't mean that you will never see another being again.

I don't know what else I can say about this. It is a wonderful work. It is obviously backed by many emotions from you and your family and it can evolk a strong response from somebody like me. Although I have no children I have expreienced great loss and can relate to this.

Bravo.
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Review by Lovely Strife
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem reminds me of my great-grandmother who died several years ago... I miss her so very much and this brings back up all of those memories. If you wanted to write something that envokes emotion then you hit the nail on the head.

I love poems where things are not in an obvious rhyme scheme. I think that in most poems you convey more emotion this way because you are not nearly as restricted.

I wish I could stay more, but this is an incredible work and I love it so much. You did a wonderful job and I can't think of anything you could do to make this a better entry. Keep up the great work!
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Review by Lovely Strife
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very well presented work. I love how you use logic and reason to prove your point just as a bitter atheist would use it to prove their own. My husband is atheist and is quite bitter about the fact that there is no God and that there is nothing more than what we see before us. I believe otherwise and have used similar techniques when my husband picks a fight about the existance of higher beings.

You use logic to prove your point and you present it in a very well-written article. Not everybody can present a logical arguement that is easily followed on paper, and I believe you have done that. Congratulations!

This article hits hom for me because of the debates myhusband and I have had on this same topic, and it does stir up many of the emotions brought on by such talk. It is reassuring to know that I am not the only person who sees the world in this way.

Thank you very much for writing this article and submitting it on this website. I throughly enjoyed reading it. ^_^
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