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Review of 1st friend  
Review by Christine
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I like where you were trying to go with this short story but I did not find it interesting. No disrespect but you have the story in your mind but you are not putting it down the way it needs to read. Keep writing and it will get easier to pull the reader into the story. I think you have great potential to do this.


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