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Review of Living in a Globe  
Review by Luke Potgieter
Rated: E | (2.0)
Good use of language, good point attempted; although it was vague. The writing piece was too short, it lacked precision and was unclear to the average reader. There was also one or two lines that had no relation to what your point was, therefore it threw your piece even further off balance. Next time, a longer and more thorough piece would be perfect to demonstrate your point.
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