It had a strong beginning but at the end it seemed as if there could have been a little more. I'm not sure if there was a word limit or not, however for me the ending could have been a little more informative. Otherwise, it had a great sense of how someone may think if they had a mental illness. It just depends on what kind of illness they have! Maybe next time include that?
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