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Review of The Abduction  
Review by Janskii
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Hi, Garrick

The concept of the story is impressive though, It didn't made much a chill (for me). I think, it's because the start of the story confused me. Also, in the story, It says, "I took a pair of ice tongs, put the two ends into his head and used a winch, clamped it to the tongs and lifted. The wench groaned as I walked out.” I was like, "huh?". The story left me with too many questions.

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