This is not only gory but funny as well. Gory in the normal tense as far as the story is twisted, and funny as in the endings twist as well. I guess it shouldn't be funny, but just thinking about it ands imagining the scene just seems as a scary, funny twisted ending. Keep up the GREAT work!
Great! This is just like the others, as soon as the action started, I was not able to stop reading it. I hope to see more of your work as I am almost done reading from your portfolio, please keep writing, its great!
Ok... this is a story that starts tragic and ends with a harsh twist. Thats the way these stories should be written. I like it a lot, the idea to draw your audience and then twist it around the way you did was great! I hope to see more of these types of stories. Good luck and keep up the great writing!
good read... i think more details of the victims and their suffering would have helped make it longer and a little more thrillfull... but well written overall. should add more to it or a second part regarding how this guy is getting closer to being caught or if he changes his victims profile and torture, play with it a little and good luck!
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