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Review of The Dream  
Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great... need I say more? Keep them coming!
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Review of Jo-Jo the Clown  
Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ay-yay-yay... and you keep doing such great work. I hope you have been published... or at least looking to getting published. You will be very SUCCESSFUL!

Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Watercourse  
Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
And you keep spitting out these great works for us to enjoy... Thanks!!

(bowing away)
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Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Once again...

Thanks for such great work...
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Review of Last ride  
Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great. Tragic but a great story, and the ending keeps you wondering what his choice was at the end. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought this was very drawn out but it was for a good reason, it built my interest to keep reading more lines to get to the next line over and over again. I really enjoyed it! Thabks!
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Review of The Bug  
Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is an example of a great horror story... it starts with strange minute details and keeps the readers attention and the reader wondering what the outcome will be at the next sentence; and then the kicker, when the character that was aware of his surroundings is effected. I enjoyed it!!

Thanks for sharing
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Review of Left Hand  
Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great! Who would have known that trying to write would possess the one thing that puts your ideas on paper...

Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Slaughter House  
Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
GREAT!!!!!
This had my attention from the very start and it never lost its grasp of me. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Granson Place  
Review by Bima
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Your writing never stops amazing me or catching my attention. Thanks for sharing!
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Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This was great, it kept my attention going. Thanks for sharing
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Review of After the Funeral  
Review by Bima
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful... would have been nice to know how everyone died, but this is good enough. Thanks for sharing!
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Review of Don't Walk  
Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good story, I think it may have been a little drawn out, but I think it was proper for the effect of a mean professor. Thanks for sharing!
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Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a great read for Halloween kiddies everywhere. I feel its a little drawn out but it makes for the suspense of the kids. I think it would have been a little more detailed on the lumberjack and how he came to be as well as what turned him evil. But this is fine. Thanks for sharing!
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Review of The Funeral  
Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My man! Your stories never seize to amaze and awe me! Another great write for your folder. Thanks for sharing with all of us!
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Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is GREAT!!! Horribly funny! Thank you for sharing... may I copy this and give it to my daughter? She would get a kick out of this. Thanks again!!!
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Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
gotta love premonitions and superstitions... thanks
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Review of Touched  
Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
this is good for more of an action story than a horror one... thanks.
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Review of Ol' Fat Charlie  
Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
great! everytime i think i have read something of yours that i think is a 'best' you always put something out there to catch my interest and hook me.
Like a fish... i think i may have swallowed the hook, I guess i should be reading your port.

Thanks, i really enjoyed it!
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Review of Mr. Bones  
Review by Bima
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
good one...
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Review of Possession  
Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very good. It has me looking over my shoulders... the way a good scary story should.

Thanks!
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Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Loved it!
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Review of Snow Angels  
Review by Bima
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is great. I like it a lot... its funny because you teach your kids to listen and do what you tell them. great twist, would like to have read what happened after the shovel...
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Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Good one! A child mind for an adult and then using their fear along with a loved ones encouragement just to end up dead! Great twist and use of angels and family.
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Review of Pan(revised)  
Review by Bima
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is not only gory but funny as well. Gory in the normal tense as far as the story is twisted, and funny as in the endings twist as well. I guess it shouldn't be funny, but just thinking about it ands imagining the scene just seems as a scary, funny twisted ending. Keep up the GREAT work!
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